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let go
by juli mccarthy
8.23.05
writing






Shut up and give me your mouth
Fresh and sweet as wine
Lay your hands on me
Tremble under mine

Let go
(speak to me)
Let go
(touch me)
Let go
(let me)

Give me the salt of your skin
Let me taste your fire
Lie down beneath me
Yield to my desire

Let go
(speak to me)
Let go
(touch me)
Let go
(let me)

Give your lust over to me
Open wide your eyes
Watch me take you down
Let me hear your cries

Let go
(speak to me)
Let go
(touch me)
Let go
(come for me)


ABOUT JULI MCCARTHY

A whole gallon of attitude, poured into a pint container.

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COMMENTS

dan gonzalez
8.23.05 @ 11:26p

Hot damn this is sensual, sultry... I need an ice-pack and a sea-breeze.


karl kiessling
8.24.05 @ 1:44a

Phew....it's getting hott in here...and I think I'm gonna need a tissue in a second. Juli, I don't think I'll ever be able to look at you in the same way love. Women inherantly are more in touch with sensuality than men, but often a creative expression of that sensuality is missing. You've done a great job (once again) is bringing forth the human condition in a creative way.

stephen cook
8.25.05 @ 8:01a

Juli...call me.

juli mccarthy
8.25.05 @ 4:06p

For this kind of call, I have to charge 3.99 a minute.

tracey kelley
8.25.05 @ 4:28p

heh! No doubt! But at least you've got the voice down....

jael mchenry
8.25.05 @ 5:21p

Great piece. Very evocative, as well as other things ending in -ative. Well done!

russ carr
8.25.05 @ 10:28p

"Watch me take you down/Let me hear your cries"? Is this a love poem from Pat Robertson to Hugo Chavez? Oh wait, that was "take you OUT." ;)

juli mccarthy
8.25.05 @ 10:53p

Hrmph. It's not a love poem, anyway. It's a sex poem.

russ carr
8.25.05 @ 10:58p

"Sex"? I have a vague recollection of the word...



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